T3 Asttle Writing

 This is my Asttle writing that I did in 50 Minutes. 

22 September 2021

WALT:  Express myself in Narrative Writing

Once upon a time deep into the dark woods there was a Teenager with curly brown hair, she had a silky dark purple dress that went down to her ankles and a little purple hair clip made out of the same fabric as the purple dress. That teenager’s name is Jamica. Every time Jamica skipped through the woods she would go past a tiny squirrel in an oak tree. The squirrel’s name is Allison and he has two white stripes going down his back with a puffy but very soft reddish brown tail that feels as soft as your best blanket and I can’t forget to mention Allison’s dark blue eyes. It’s almost like Allison can see things from a mile away! One day when Jamica skipped through the woods she heard a noise and she followed it until she came face to face with a giant dark brown bear with the richest brown eyes and the most jaggedy, sharp teeth Jamica had ever seen in her life. 

Jamica and the bear

As soon as Jamica came face to face with the bear she screamed as loud as she could and Allison could see her face to face with the bear. Allison didn’t notice who it was with the bear so Allison kept lying down and looking at magazines. Jamica ran as fast as she could to her house and on the way there she got lost in the middle of the wood’s where no one could hear her shouting out “Someone please come and help me get back home!” Allison heard her that time and thought “Are they calling out for help from me?” So Allison ran as fast as a cheetah and when he could hear someone sobbing he looked that way and found out who it was then started running even faster then he ever had in his life. Allison came to a stop as soon as he saw Jamica and asked her “Why are you crying Jamica?” Jamica explained to Allison that she came face to face with a big growly bear and that she got so scared that she ran as fast as she could away from the bear and then she got lost in the middle of the woods. Allison yelled out “Look at what you did to this poor girl you should apologise.” The bear realised that scaring people was not funny so he walked droopily and sadly to Jamica and apologised to her for scaring her. Jamica thought about what the bear had told her and she told him back that she accepts that apology and that they can be friend’s so the bear’s not lonely. 

The Happy Ending

Jamica and the bear lived happily as a family and moved Jamica's house closer so they could have breakfast, lunch and dinner all together. Bear would always do anything with or for Jamica, especially when bear’s favourite thing to do is catch fish in the stream nearby the wood’s. Jamica decided to do something, something to repay Bear for being so nice to Jamica so she named Bear Oliver. Oliver was very proud of himself and Jamica. Do you think Jamica would go deep into the woods again?