Here is my speech about why tik tok should be banned. Kio ra my name is Lucy and today I’m going to 100% persuade you with my reasons as to why tik tok should be banned at schools. The first reason why it should be banned is because it has rude music with swear words and rude dancing. I have found that people pretend that it's just having fun and dancing but it can be really inappropriate. You have no control of the next video that pops up, the video could be really inappropriate or quite rude. My friend told me that she said to her mum that she goes on tik tok because it is fun and “Not inappropriate.”She is wrong, like I said before it has rude dancing and rude music that can sometimes have swear words. The next reason why tik tok should be banned is because kids spend waaaaaay too much time on Ipads phones and everything like that. The ages from 4 to 15 now spend approximately 80 minutes per day on tik tok. Also kids that think they're funny can cyber bully people that use tik tok. Tik tok can be a distraction from homework and it means that kids don’t spend almost any time having fun playing with a whole lot of other friends outside. Do you have a bank account or something special like your bank and what you bought online kept online that you can only get into with your email or password? If you go on tik tok and share lots of videos then you probably should be careful because sometimes people can find your email and go into some of your private stuff and wipe out your whole bank and all that money that you saved could be gone forever. Guess what, the TikTok star gets 50,000 dollars from every video she posts because of all her followers, where does she get that money from and it is not fair, it looks like the tik tok star spends all that money on make-up, nice clothes and new hair accessories not even making one dollar of it a charity. Thankyou for listening to my speech about why TikTok should be banned. I hope you enjoyed hearing my speech and I hope I have persuaded you as to why tik tok should be wiped out of this world forever.
I am a Year 5 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Mrs Junjovich is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feed forward. Other times I will share my final published pieces. I would appreciate any feedback through leaving me a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. Thank you
Friday, May 21, 2021
Friday, May 14, 2021
Mothers Day Writing
Please read this and tell me if you like it.
My Mummy reminds me of the red bottle brush trees that the
bee’s and I love. She is loving.
My Mummy reminds me of the mandarins that smell beautiful
like the perfume I always try to spray on her. She smells good
anyway.
My Mummy reminds me of the yellow hibiscus blooming with
kindness.
My Mummy reminds me of all the memories about when I was
little walking through tall green grass that was abit too long.
This reminds me of all the fun our family had together.
My Mummy reminds me of the brand new jeans that look good
like her.
My Mummy reminds me of the tiny, pretty lobelia growing in
our backyard. This one is because your very pretty.
This is why my mum should be nominated.
💖Lucy💖
Te Puawai
Monday, April 12, 2021
Maori Games
click here for some of the other early Maori games
Click on the top link after clicking here.
This is the slide that I have been working on.
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Water Fun Day
This is my water fun day writing
Recount of our Water fun day.
This Wednesday the whole school brought togs to have a water fun swim. All of the girls in Te Puawai dashed off with our togs to get changed into our fancy togs. It was hard to get my top part on because I was so excited about the water fun swim, I started skipping along to the slippery black and soapy water slide.
There was a blue tunnel slide that you would shoot down, then you would go flying off the end. I kept saying to myself, “I am not doing that!” Every time it was someone's turn Sir would say, “Go!!” Then people would go. Chase was funny because he went down and landed completely lying down, Everybody said, “Ohh.” Next, Chase stuck his thumb up and yelled, “I’m ok!” I had one turn on the slippery black water slide then wandered over to have a dip in the pool. Me and my best friend Kaydee dived all the way to the deep part of the pool trying to dodge everyone in the pool oh and also all of the net-balls and water guns. The water guns were really hard to dodge. Kaydee and I kept on screaming like this, “Aah!” Koda helped us with that too. After the scream we all started giggling. After getting really wet in the pool the two of us raced over to the little playground and tried out that slide. It was almost faster, then the big blue slide. My fourth time on the little slide I flew off the end of the light blue slide. I kept begging and begging for Kaydee to do the same as what I did. I told her that, “It does not hurt when you fly off the end.’’ I don’t think she believed me with that. Kaydee did try to fly off but she kept trying and she never stopped stopping touching the ground. After all that fun I lied down with some of my friends in the sun until we packed up.
Finally the teachers yelled, “Time for your last turn then pack up and get changed!” So everyone ran off and started getting changed. As all the girls were getting ready to go home and get changed Mihi got her undies on and realised she forgot her pants, Mihi yelled, “Aaah I forgot my shorts!!” Luckily a really nice friend Koda ran off when she finished getting changed and scooped up Mihi’s pants and raced them off to her. After all that I hopped on the bus with my friends and finished my day cuddling up and reading to my family.
Reflection
I really enjoyed it when me and Mihi jumped around in the pool dodging everyone. I loved playing with my friends in the sprinklers. Next time I will go on the blue tunnel slide.
Sir saying go
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Yellow mats
Swimming Pool
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Thursday, April 8, 2021
When It Rains
When it rains
It drips,
It pours,
It puddles,
It sprinkles
and it saturates cows trying
to snooze in their paddock.
It showers over me when
I’m scooting to the car after
shopping at my favorite store.
I make rain when I dribble as I’m
napping in bed, my dreams
full of chocolate cake.
Lucy💧💧💧
Thursday, March 25, 2021
My Maths Strategies
WALT: Solve addition by place value Partitioning
This is my google slide, please tell me if there is anything wrong with it.
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Friday, March 12, 2021
Tsunami Warning
8 March 2021
WALT: Write a narrative
Tsunami Warning Friday 5/03/21
Last Friday Paparore School had a Tsunami warning. As soon as everybody in the class heard the alarm we were wondering what the alarm was for. As soon as Mrs Jujnovich said that everyone in the school had to get our bags and to go to the hall, everyone was worried and really confused.
As all of us headed off for Maunga Ngatu, that was when I realised that It was a Tsunami Warning. When the school crossed the road I could hear people saying ‘climbing the fence is tricky’ then me and my friend could hear “aww that really hurts when I stand on gause.” Our first stop was just under higher ground, we all had a little snack and a drink of water there and some students got picked-up by their Mum or Dad.
The next place we went to was our highest ground, that was when me, Mihi, Grace and Kaydee did each other's hair. When Mihi was doing Kaydee’s hair me and Grace did Rapunzel dolls hair, we kept trying to make the dolls' hair nice. Grace had to have a hair tie to do Rapunzel's hair so I gave her my spare hair tie. After doing Rapunzel's hair me, my friends and Mrs. Jujnovich played a game of I spy with my little eye. I would say that everyone got one point each, I think Mrs. Jujnovich got the most points though.
After all that Sir arrived and we went downhill so he could put up the gazebo for some shade. They also brought up the barbecue so we could have a yummy treat. As the sausages were cooking I smelt and heard them sizzling on the barbecue, and us all singing waiata together. After the waiata we all had a yummy barbecue.
Then we had a hikoi back to school. On the way back most of us got to meet Stig, Mihi’s doggy. When we got to school I packed up my stuff and went home.
WHAT A DAY!!!