Narrative Writing

 Monday 27 September 2021

WALT: Add descriptive features to my Narrative

Once upon a time in the sunny tropical islands of Fiji there lived a cheetah called Bella. They say that Bella is the most fierce cheetah they have ever seen in their lives. As people came to see Bella, Bella noticed that one of them looked like the person that checks her health but then when he came closer and then patted her, she felt like he should live with her. The man had a really funny looking hat and a colourful lab coat. He had a lot of gadgets and all sorts of different things like straws, metal things, hooks and even food all on one hat. The funny man was called Peter. Peter felt the same way that Bella thought so he thought that he should take her home and so he did. They lived together for years and then Peter noticed that Bella had a pup over the time that Peter had stayed with her. Bella adored her pup but after a while Peter noticed that her pup was not growing fast and that it was a kitten. Oh oh!!

The Kitten Catastrophe

The kitten was the most trouble that Peter had ever experienced. The most annoying part was when Peter would try to go to work by himself but instead there was a kitten holding onto him the whole time instead of working. The only time Peter could have a rest was when Bella and her kitten were having a nap. Bella was getting bigger and bigger and harder to take care of by himself and the kitten started to get extra annoying from trying to climb on the curtains, always meowing for attention and eating all of the food in the rubbish bin. Bella was getting way too big to be living in Peter's house so Peter kicked Bella out of the house to see if it was any better then before and it turned out to be a lot worse because the kitten did not sleep at all. The kitten ended up being like her mother, all grouchy, mean, fierce, and really looking forward to catching prey even if she knew that she was not going to find any prey that day. As Bella grew the kitten grew and that was the moment when Peter thought of a great idea and he went off to find the old time traveller that he made years and years ago. 

The Time Traveller

Every night and every day Peter would be looking for his time traveller. First Peter tested it on a toy that he didn’t like then He put Bella into the time traveller and then set it to 6 years ago. Then off Bella went! Do you think Bella will ever come back?