I am a Year 5 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Mrs Junjovich is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feed forward. Other times I will share my final published pieces. I would appreciate any feedback through leaving me a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. Thank you
Hi Sammy, Thank-you for reading my blog and suggestion to add more detail to my next blog. The sentence at the bottom is just the start of my writing, I will add more onto it when I have finished my descriptive writing. Has your class done descriptive writing too?
Me and my friends are in this beautiful turquoise water with the sparkling sun diving into the water. The rocks are razor sharp and are really jagged. 
wow this is amazing next time you could add more writing from sammy
ReplyDeleteHi Sammy, Thank-you for reading my blog and suggestion to add more detail to my next blog. The sentence at the bottom is just the start of my writing, I will add more onto it when I have finished my descriptive writing. Has your class done descriptive writing too?
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